原文：全国以西湖命名的淡水湖泊有36处，杭州西湖是其中自然风光最秀丽的一个。译文：In China,there are actu

原文：全国以西湖命名的淡水湖泊有36处，杭州西湖是其中自然风光最秀丽的一个。译文：In China,there are actually 36 fresh-water lakes that got the name of West Lake, the West Lake in Hangzhou is somehow blessed with the most picturesque natural scenery.改译：
【正确答案】：In China,there are actually 36 fresh-water lakes that got the name of West Lake,of which the one in Hangzhou is somehow blessed with the most picturesque natural scenery.【解析】原译文句子结构不正确，两个分的间没有连接词，原句中“是其中之一”没有译出，应在前后两句间加of which，使后面一句作定语从句。后半的the West Lake与前文重复，英语中常用代词the one替换。