原文：在过去的几十年中，全国性的“全民健身活动”使中国人民的健康水平得到了很大的提高，人均寿命大幅提高。译文:Over the

原文：在过去的几十年中，全国性的“全民健身活动”使中国人民的健康水平得到了很大的提高，人均寿命大幅提高。译文:Over the past few decades,the nationwide“fitness-for-all"sports campaign has greatly improved Chinese people's health,and has substantially increased the average life expectancy.改译：
【正确答案】：Over the past few decades,thanks to the nationwide“fitness-for-all”sports campaign,Chinese people's health has been greatly improved,and the average life expectancy has increased substantially.【解析】原译文句子语态使用不正确，英语句子多用被动语态。“使健康水平得到了很大的提高”，英译时应转换为被动，译为health has been greatly improved,而将原句的主语“全民健身运动”改作状语，译为thanks to the nationwide “fitmess-for-all”sports campaign。