原文：上海汇聚了10000多种地方特色菜，美食之众，誉满天下。译文：Shanghai collects more than 10

原文：上海汇聚了10000多种地方特色菜，美食之众，誉满天下。译文：Shanghai collects more than 10,000 specialty dishes and it is famous for this.改译：
【正确答案】：Shanghai enjoys an international reputation for the excellent cuisine-more than 10,000specialty dishes can be found here.【解析】原译文对英语语言运用不熟练，结构不当“上海汇聚了……”中文是主动，但英语则需用被动表达，将宾语变主语，译作more than 10,000 specialty dishes can be found here；“美食之众，享誉天下”是说上海因美食而享受美誉，译作Shanghai enjoys an international reputation for the excellent cuisine；根据逻辑关系，将“享誉天下”提前，将原因放在后面，也符合英语的表达习惯。