原文:与SARS成为瞩目中心的同时,一种由来已久的更具传染性的疾病正在抬起它丑恶的头。译文:While SARS has bec

原文:与SARS成为瞩目中心的同时,一种由来已久的更具传染性的疾病正在抬起它丑恶的头。
译文:While SARS has become the center of attention which an ancient and more infectious disease is raising its ugly head.
【正确答案】:
改译:While SARS has become the center of attention, an ancient and more infectious disease is raising its ugly head.